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To Forever Sleep

Is what I truelly wish for

Beauty in Death

Reviews

[A.J. Smith]

Thank you, Karen123, for asking me to review your work. I think Gabe's comments below are perfect. Death, which may indeed be wonderful, will be a state you will be in for all eternity. Life is but a brief flicker; don't rush it. Any darkness you now face will surely mold you into someone special, someone uniquely gifted to perform a vital service at some point later in your life. I guarantee that, some day, when you are old, you will be glad you endured your time on Earth, because you will have made a real difference in a life, or maybe more than one life. Some human, who you may not even know yet, is going to forever changed for the better because of you, and because of what you've experienced in your life, good and bad. I hope you keep writing, expressing your fears, frustrations and anxieties...you will discover you are among friends here, and not alone.

[Kelley]

your short sweet poem......ok maybe not sweet but great poem
speaks in volumes. Some pray for death, some take their own life.
But we all know that death is making it all go away.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[An owl on the moon]

Passionate write, moving from the emptiness of life to the depth of endless sleep... Am looking forward to more of your writing!

[Rain]

I loved the deep meaning of this, but not the reality of losing you to eternal sleep. So powerful, with so few words. There is a beauty to the thought of peace. They say "Death" is the only absolute truth. There in the beauty lies, but life has another beauty, Death will come when it's ready. Don't ever deny yourself the breathtaking other beauties that also bring peace. I loved this. Rain..

[Marjorie]

Very short and simple but profound. I very much like your beautiful poem.

[Emily B]

Exquisite in its simplicity but true depth.

[Baby Boy]

So much has been said in so little words! I have a hard time of doing that but you mastered it and it speaks such volume! Great job sweetie! One luv Miss Karen! :)



-JC-

[The Tao of Bri]

when ya gonna post more??? s'il vous plait...pour va vour

[--]

Like the agelessness of a memory fades into the past


Embrasse'
Vickie

[The Tao of Bri]

We are all already dead and sleeping...when we wake up...Oh glorious living! I really liked the write as it is thought provoking and honest... Hope you wait it out until it gets better! It will!~B