Make her break

Make her break

A Poem by Karebear

Walking staggering down the hall

Watch her break, watch her fall

Make the move, you can begin

Bring her into your sin

Press the buttons, all just right

You know she'll go without a fight

Give her the taste of sins sweet bitterness

Give her the touch of sweet, sorrowful tenderness

Draw her in with manipulative lies

Break her down until she cries

Make her feel like theres no way out

Give her pain until she screams and shouts

And when this bidding is good an done

Fear her, the angry one.

 

Karebear

© 2008 Karebear


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Great write, a lot of passion in this piece. I love the end it reminds me of "woman scorned" quote.

Just a typo note, I think you meant scream not cream.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Karebear
Karebear

North Syracuse, NY



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I am a single mother of two, and I barely have the time to write anymore, but when I get in the mood, I just feel like getting something out. I also enjoy music and hanging out. more..

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