Destiny

The theory of the world.

New beginnings

Are the result 

Of painful endings.

And painful endings

Are unavoidable

Because new beginnings,

End.

Author's Note

Wasn't in the best mood when I wrote this ... it's short and simple... What do you think?

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

Wow...this is...yknow, actually really deep. You've barely scratched the surface of a greater story, the stories of generations upon generations. You've told the stories of those who wish to speak, but fear stops them from doing so. You've taken the voices of those who have wanted to say this and mixed it with your own to create a powerful piece overflowing with mixed emotions.

*deep inhale*

Great job as always :) 100/100

[Nix]

Quietly profound. Short and sharp. So I will keep my review like that.
End

I think it's short, but that's the beauty of it, with a very wise message, and meaning behind it... It needs nothing more or less, just perfect.

E.L.

[Petal]

:0 Karalynn i loved this poem it was super deep and its just a great poem!!