Mom

Mom

A Poem by Luna Northstar
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I promised my mom to always tell her everything. I almost forgot about it. I thought, stupidly, she wouldn't love me anymore. Right now it seems everyone hates me, and I as afraid my mom would too.

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Caught up in so much drama
Not sure how a feel
But I know only one thing
That I'm sure is real

I almost forgot it
I almost lost 
And that is a mistake
With a very high cost

Many people lie to me
So I run to you
No friend's, no boy's,
Love is as true

You were there when I first walked
You were there when I first fell
You were there through it all
You were my shell

You protected me for the bombs
You protected me from the knives
You were always there
To protect me from the lies

But you couldn't always protect me
Because the bombs found a way in
And ripped my world apart
And made the lies begin

Feeling alone and deserted
I was so afraid
I didn't want to tell you
To destroy the love we made

I didn't want you to hate me
I didn't want to be rejected again
And I almost forgot 
That you were my best friend

You were there when I first walked
You were there when I first fell
You were there through it all
You were my shell

I know you can't protect me from it all
And stop every bomb
But all that matters is your love
I love you mom!

© 2010 Luna Northstar


Author's Note

Luna Northstar
I promised my mom to always tell her everything. I almost forgot about it. I thought, stupidly, she wouldn't love me anymore. Right now it seems everyone hates me, and I as afraid my mom would too. But, she always loves me, i know that. I love u mum.

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Once again a really nice poem, just a few errors here and their with spelling, or a typo , but your a-b-c-b pattern was effective. yet once again you had a really heart felt message with all the emotion that was pouring out of this poem. You have a really good talent with poetry and I love reading it. So yes another great poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love my mom 2

Posted 14 Years Ago


you with the face what do you mean everyone is mad at you what abut me, amber, emma, chenyu, michelle, and the others. Karalynn we all love you and you know that so don't say were mad at you and hate you.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Luna Northstar
Luna Northstar

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I go by the name Luna Northstar and take my writing very seriously. I've grown out of my teenage angst poetry writing phase and I'm focusing on my novel "It's Alice", though I tend to write a few shor.. more..

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