And I know the Way You Look at Me.

I dreant we sang along to the rhythm of the sea,

lost in the waves,

obsessed with the melody.

 

And darlin' I've never been so sure,

I've never wanted you more.

 

I'd use up every corny line I could ever find,

if only those lines were customized,

to make you mine once again.

 

And my worries about the future melt away when I'm wrapped in your arms,

stay here forever,

if that's not too cliche,

and lead me through the unpredicatable.

 

I've never wanted this more,

And darlin' i've never been so damn sure.

 

We'll dance to the rhythm of the sea,

lost in each other,

obsessed with the melody.

Reviews

[The_Jabberwock]

This is beautiful. I love the third stanza, and the repetition of the "i" sound. The words seemed to fit together pretty well, I enjoyed it.