A Traditional Japanese Haiku

A Traditional Japanese Haiku

A Poem by KarMarBar
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My first attempt at the 3 line 5/7/5 syllable style. I gave it my best shot.

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Need humanity.
Hatred, hurt, pain, anger. No.
Come together now.

© 2015 KarMarBar


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Hear, hear to that. Awesome job, man. A simple traditionally structured haiku, simple and straight to the point.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

8 Years Ago

Thanks! It was first attempt, so I'm really glad you liked it!
Short and sweet, a message ringing clear. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I was worried about trying to write a traditional Japanese Haiku because I never have bef.. read more
Dang. I feel the feel of this poem, my friend. Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so lets all pray for peace,great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Traditionally done. Powerful. Great work. Essential messages a best carried in small packages

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree. You said enough. I pray and hope for peace and logic daily. Guns don't bring peace. Food, water and medicine open the door to peace.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 28, 2015
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KarMarBar
KarMarBar

West Haven, CT



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I am new to this website so I have to figure my way around a bit, so please bare with me. A little about me... I have always considered myself better with the written word than the spoken word. I have.. more..

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