Simply, I Love You

A short, but sweet poem for my fiance...

Just sitting at my computer,

alone in the studio apartment

we share our lives in,

and I think about you.

So I'll try to write a poem

that can express my love for you.

But there would never be enough words

to describe my appreciation for you.

I'll try to tell you how much I love you,

how I cannot believe we've been through so much.

I can thank you for saving my life.

I can thank you for being that crutch.

I can tell you much I appreciate

how I never have to worry about you,

about how I know you will be faithful no matter the circumstance,

I can let you know the same is true about me in regards to you.

I can try to make some more words rhyme

to convey how I feel inside

But words can only say about us...

soul mates - it'll be worth the ride.

Reviews

[A hare off]

I think you said it perfectly. How we truly feel is so hard to put into words, it always seems that when we finish writing there is still something missing. We search long and hard for those perfect words that will express exactly what we are feeling in our herats. But, "Simply, I love you" is all of them wrapped up in a wonderful little four word package that says everything. Great writing.

[KarMarBar]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work! I greatly appreciate your feedback.

[Southern_Writes]

Very beautiful, I think it is hard at times to tell someone all that we love, but I find my hands can speak for my heart, where my tongue often falters.

[McBear]

AHH! The beginning literally made me cry. This is beyond beautiful!

[KarMarBar]

Aww, thank you! :)

[ANTO]

Heart - behold keyboard - fingers type keyboard - heart appears on screen.
Class !

[annalysiar]

Beautiful poem. Wonderful dedication...i love the emotion

[KarMarBar]

Thank you!

[annalysiar]

You're welcome😃

[jesserose99]

makes me wish that I had that. lovely poetry. simply put and straight to the point.

[KarMarBar]

Thank you. You won't find it, but I promise it will find you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"But words can only say about us...
soul mates - it'll be worth the ride."
Words are cool but Life together make the love grow to new heights and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[KarMarBar]

I appreciate your kind words. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

just a hug and a tender kiss ! loved your words of love !

[KarMarBar]

That's all. :) Thank you!