Anger

Anger

A Poem by KarMarBar
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A poem I wrote awhile back just venting..

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You made me believe in every word that you said. 
Now I look at myself and wish I were dead. 
Who do you think you are to mess with my head?
I should have realized that something for you, it always led. 
After I ate up all of the bullshit you fed. 
But I'll just move on because there's no more tears to shed. 
I'll probably be gone by the time this is read. 
Go on and break someone else instead. 
You have a way with that, keeping me hanging on by a thread. 
Just excuse my venting and forget everything I just said. 

© 2015 KarMarBar


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Hey have you met my first love?
Really enjoyed this. Raw anger and frustration, but not only at the person this directed at, but I see it aimed at yourself as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

9 Years Ago

I am glad our writing mirrors one another's experiences. It was directed to my mother, but in hindsi.. read more
Southern_Writes

9 Years Ago

You are welcome, it is wonderfully done.

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Added on November 17, 2015
Last Updated on November 17, 2015
Tags: anger, venting, vent

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KarMarBar
KarMarBar

West Haven, CT



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I am new to this website so I have to figure my way around a bit, so please bare with me. A little about me... I have always considered myself better with the written word than the spoken word. I have.. more..

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