Sleepover

Sleepover

A Poem by Micah
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A poem inspired by a sleepover i had at a friends house. It's about not letting anyone in.

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You Ignored me,

and you bored me,

but I didn't want to core me.

You were jealous,

so was I,

but neither you nor I will core me.

I am callous.

I am hidden.

We were both a little smitten,

but you still don't seem to know me.

You can't core me.

You can't see me.

I am hidden.

So are you.

© 2008 Micah


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I'M SORRRRRY! jk... this is really good i like it

Posted 16 Years Ago


such imagery when you use the word core
interesting......
cheers
and welcome here
lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


awesome micah. i really like this. the rhymes are cool

Posted 16 Years Ago


"I am callous.

I am hidden.

We were both a little smitten"

Love the word play, here.



Posted 16 Years Ago


I liked it, your choice of words are just brilliant!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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