Biceps

He'd built his biceps to bursting point,
I saw the way the girls looked at him,
And I saw the way I looked at the girls,
And the way they looked at me looking at them,
Because I was looking at them through a mirror,
And the guy with the big biceps and awful veins saw us looking,
Looking at him and each other,
I thought this was the moment,
So I pushed all 150 pounds and broke my shoulder, and my chances.

Reviews

[Laz K.]

So, I just want to know whether the girls did like those bulging bicepses? The research on that is inconclusive. :)
This poem is really fun and funny, but of course, it also shows how pathetic we are when we try to impress - which is always, I guess.
The lines that describe how everyone is looking at others and perceiving themselves while doing it is brillinat.

[KaplanKop]

Thanks for reading Laz, much appreciated.

[Chris Shaw]

Sounds too dangerous. Stick to the chat up lines. They may work better. You did give me a smile on a cold day.

Chris

[John the Baptist]

Oh, well, you never know unless you try.

[KaplanKop]

Next time I'll try with some beer.