Imagination

Don't let your imagination run wild

You'll be carried into world of mist

You'll wander off like a small child

And come back to find the worlds don't exist

Don't get your hopes up with a smile

It'll only hurt more when you miss

It doesn't matter how hard you tried

Your name will never be on the list

So get some sleep, you look so tired

But don't imagine you'll get a kiss

Don't think for a second you're worthwhile

Your imagination as a way to twist...

A lying fool to believe that anyone will want you

Don't fall for your dreams, because honestly, they will never, ever come true...

Author's Note

If you don't get your hopes up, you can't get disappointed
If you don't have dreams... They can't be crushed.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. I believe reach for things you want. May get lucky. I believe most dreams are crushed with adulthood. Life turn to okay to s**t. I believe we change with time and struggle. After a while. New dreams appear. Just small ones. A powerful poem. Open the door to thoughts and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[KaoticOrder]

Thanks, glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[613]

Very well written. There were a few grammatical errors but other than that, nice job!

- Brittney

[KaoticOrder]

Thanks for the review!
Could you point out the mistakes so I can correct them? Grammar is a issue of mine, lol

[613]

Did you mean to say "worlds" or did you want it to say "world" in the first stanza?
"You're name will never be on the list" - should say, "Your name will never be on the list"
"They will never ever come true" - should say, "They will never, ever come true"

I hope that helped!
& you're welcome!

[KaoticOrder]

Worlds was the correct word I was using. Referring to worlds people create in their mind.
and haha, I feel stupid for making the your/you're mistake. Lol.
But thanks, I will edit it. =)