Miracles infused with Misery 0.1

my mind is all messed up

My skin has the smell
of blood from the wounds you cause.
And this I can only tell
I want to put this moment on pause.
Without worrying if I'll fall

Because I still want you by my side
no matter
how hard it is for us to be alright
and flatter
each other while in love.

Yet miracles do not happen
neither can we make them reality
without having a burden
on us, this calamity
of misery and despair.

I just hope I won't have another dream,
filled with hopelessness
and that feeling I am
full of loneliness.

Reviews

[The dark story]

it's actually a hurting truth that miracles don't happen in reality like what you have said there...don't you think having a loving person in your life is less than a miracle?...yet it becomes painful when we can't live each moment with them beside us!!! but still, we can't give up trying,can we?...we try and fail,yet the real failure sizes us when we stop trying,that's the essence i had caught in your poem:
"I want to put this moment on pause.
Without worrying if I'll fall

Because I still want you by my side
no matter how hard it is for us to be alright "...really a touching write with such a pretty style and influencing diction!!
you're truly an amazing writer!!