The Woman

You exist. I know you do.
You are there. I am too.
I love thy essence
I love your presence.

I am in love with you,
my love is true
I love your power
to become, like a tower,

Shelter for my dreams
to keep them from falling
and when my life you are calling

I answer, humble and sometimes
afraid, but you always
show you'll be there till my last days.

Reviews

[smilempsn]

nicely framed :)

[ErosNthanatos]

A Calling...beautiful.

[Lupus Kaos]

if there is any beauty, it is because it has a reason. the Woman, a gift from God

[ErosNthanatos]

great prespective

[Mermaidstear]

Beautiful ! I loved the rhymes :)

[Lupus Kaos]

Thank you Bhakti. I'm glad you liked it.

[Trigorin]

Fairly well-written poem, but the 'thy' in line 3 really throws off the feel of the rest of the poem when you don't bother to include any other Shakespearean language in the same vein. I'd personally just cut that 'thy' and write 'your', it'd be much more effective that way. As for the concept, it does come across as perhaps a little obsessive, but maybe that's what you were going for. Asides from those two little quibbles, this is a well-done piece and it presents a clear image and message. Good work.

[Lupus Kaos]

It is actually meant to look obsessive, as is the relationship it was inspired from.