4 the absent 1

why?

You promised to b there
to relief me from my grief
You said you 'd b true
and your love won't b brief.

Now on the dance floor
of this life's way too loud club
I find it hard 2 believe in any1
cause u 've left me behind.

My Eyes' cinema shows only dramas
for in our relationship
you put an end by a lover's
letter...................
.......................
.....................

What you've left behind
is me torn in pieces
for inside your last life's letter
you chose to accuse just me.

Reviews

[Mary]

truth of pain of a broken heart flows throughout your poem. Usually, I don't care for "text speak" in writing, but it really works well here.

[Lupus Kaos]

thank you Mary. I wrote my true feelings, maybe that is why there is a little pain

[steppenwolf]

Close to real life. We've probably all gone through this.
I like the last part a lot.

[Lupus Kaos]

At some point, it felt as if I was shut down, thus I chose to place some dots rather than write something I didn't mean. And then came the last part like a memory bomb.

[steppenwolf]

It's the right of every poet to use punctuation as he/she chooses...

[Mermaidstear]

"What you've left behind
is me torn in pieces
for inside your last life's letter
you chose to accuse just me."

I loved these lines very much! they are so close to my life.

[Lupus Kaos]

I am glad you relate to them, but I feel bad for that as well.