Conclusion part 2

the last poem in my last year's poetry book

One last wish I hope
that You, oh Maker, fill:
Make me while I die
no pain to feel.

To You I give my
best of all.
I give up my body
I give up my soul.

And if yet your will
it is for me
To stay alive, materialized
by peace, let me be.

Or allow my conclusion
to come with the illusion
of Her by my side

Reviews

[Ai thats life]

"Or allow my conclusion
to come with the illusion
of Her by my side" Love it!

[Lupus Kaos]

glad you do. I try hard to write in English.