Sad Song

MAYBE THIS TIME
I've lost and fallen too often
My soul is broken and my eyes are worn
My gates of misery blew open
My body and spirit are gravely torn

I tried fighting for my life
But no strength resided within me
My heart was pierced by a knife
Until I bled dry, it didn't leave me.

I died over and over
In my head, I just kept on dying
Until it began to hover
That it was time I was buying.

Maybe this time I'll win at love
And know what happiness truly feels like
Maybe this time I'll fly like a dove
And know what soaring greatness feels like.

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

I really liked this. You kinda killed me with the whole love thing because it valentines day and im sick of reading about love. But regardless this is a wonderful piece. I really liked the rhyming scheme and the choice of words. It was very catchy which was helpful in keeping my attention.
Great job again.
Stay inspired.