My Golden Damsel

Please kindly review.

In the dead of the night
The wind still echoes your name
Though the sun does shine bright
My only light is your flame
Rain on my blue desert
And calm my restless heart


Forest of withered trees
Am I when you are away
Filled with graceful bliss
Am I when to me you sway
I feel your sweet gentle soul
As I offer you my whole

"Conform not to the world
But the renewal of your mind"
Be not shaken by fud
Your doorstep grace shall find
So spread your wings and fly
Soar and reign in the blue sky


My heart aches for my golden damsel
But between us does a thousand miles dwell
Flash a smile and enjoy your day
In spirit,with you I stay.

Author's Note

Please everyone,do kindly review. I'm planning this as a surprise for someone special on their birthday. It would be more effective if I got your opinions. Thank you so much.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so lovely Master K.She will love it I am sure :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is lovely K-tops.. the words are tender and sincere and it flows so very well.