Elephant

Your kindness always seems so gray,
It leads me to the cave,
Where I’ve buried my past.
Still, I hope we might somehow last.

Through the crystal cage,
I see elephants walking in the shade.

Their eyes always make me feel shame,
No words, like the waves of the night,
I feel so blamed by the world,
How should I touch, how should I swallow your words?

Through the crystal cage,
I see elephants walking in the shade.
A quiet glance, judging every moment,
As I try to interpret this indescribable torment

Author's Note

My first poem in English:)

Reviews

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

Nicely written! I love the fact that you've included rhymes because I don't really see rhymes in poems that often anymore even though I personally think that they make a poem actually a poem! You've done an amazing job with the entire poem! :)

[Kanimogu]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem:)
It’s true that I wrote this with the rhythm in my mind.

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

Of course! You are really talented and you should definitely continue writing! Looking forward to your other poems/stories or whatever you wish to write!

[Kanimogu]

Wow, I really appreciate you. Didn’t expect such a kind words.I’m gonna try to keep writing! Thanks a lot!!

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

Of course! You deserve every single kind word! :D