Soul Mate

We met but once as though by chance,
we didn't date, or did we dance.
We looked into each other's eyes
without deception or disguise.
A silent message passed between
your hungry heart was plainly seen.
You saw desire I could not hide,
you looked at me and saw inside.

How could a glance have said so much,
and cause a chill without a touch?
What was that chemistry that night,
that promised what we felt was right?
What satisfaction we'd have missed,
If we had not reached out and kissed.
I do not know if it was you,
or was it I who said, "Let's do."
But on that night our souls were bare
as surely as our bodies there.

Our bodies moved in harmony,
I couldn't tell the you from me.
And locked in passion as we were,
my sense of time began to blur.
I must have known you from before,
how else could you have reached my core?
In life perhaps before this one
what had we shared? What had we done?
With what I felt, emotions vast,
I must have loved you in the past.

But now we go our separate ways,
to different lives throughout our days.
I keep you though within my dreams,
Eternal soul mate, so it seems

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

this is a beautiful poem. I like the flow and the image you engraved in my head with your words. kudos.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, such a wonderful flow of words and very creative, I thorughly enjoyed this write. This is so wonderful.

[sisyqueen2008]

well written,nice flow, like the rhyme, love the feel.

[DuCeZ]

awww dat waz very kute
it had a bangin flow sweetie..n it moved so smoothly.it waz so sweet and u can feel da compasion and yerning i guess you could say.it was juss banggin i dont knw how else to put it..u have came up wit another beautiful master peice!

mucc love!

[Walkingblind]

This is smooth I like how you started it off and it built up
to a great intensity but it still kept it's smooth.....I dig.
Very nice.