A letter to my life

We all have heard of letters addressed to people but never written to ones LIFE which i have lived up till now.....

                                                "A letter to my life"

Dearest life of mine,

 you are the eternal 

truth till the end of time and not a fiction 

to add colours  too by ones own choice 

you are bestowed on rich or poor even the

literate and the ill-literate for that matter 

I am a victim of yours too who never thought 

high off you, but bore you as a burden on ones 

shoulders to carry till the destination comes 

that is "DEATH" you were never kind too me 

I always portrayed you as a strict teacher with a 

cane in her hand to hit me HARD when ever given 

a chance, your given lessons were embedded in 

my mind as a nightmare never to be forgotten, dreaded 

leading you as a child is petrified going to school in the 

early days of ones age I was scared too but took all your

canning for one reason only that I will meet someone

for whom I am searching for by living you night and day

as there was no other way of finding my prince charming

so  I kept on taking what ever you dished out to me

this turned me altogether as a person that was the only

best part which I could manage to squeeze out of you

it turned me into a composed, mature, practical, humble

and a loving person for all the times too come

but now that I am able too look straight into your horrid,

ruthless, animalism eyes I am not afraid too let you 

know that I have fallen in love with you not because 

of what you are but because I have found my dream 

which I meant to follow from day one let me tell 

you while pointing a finger at you " YOU ARE NOTHING ON YOUR OWN JUST A PLAIN FACE TOO STARE ON"

but let by gone's be by gone's and be friends again 

you must be thinking I have lost it or something

but I love you truly , madly and deeply now, just 

because you have brought him into my life 

the only best thing you have managed too do 

for me so far, but lets not start all over again

and please do not take him away from me 

ever as he is the anchor of my life, he is 

all I have now do not become bitchy once again

this is all I ask you for he is all I have ever wanted

all I have ever wished for, convince my fate for

me once and make everything possible in my

favour this is all I ask you once again with this 

hope in my heart that you will not let me down

make us one for life, and I will love you as no one

has ever loved you before , but if you do the

opposite then I will turn into your biggest foe

you will be fought even if it kills me, through my

bleeding wounds I will try to stand on my stumbling

legs with blood and my sweat mingled into one

I will stare back at you saying " I HATE YOU".

Author's Note

I know you must have noticed that I have used the letter" I " more then often but too tell you the truth I could not find any other way to express my feelings but please not being so strict give me an over all review of my letter to my life.....

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

through my bleeding wounds
I will try to stand. ( Or I will? )
Speaks volumes

[Loner]

Thanks sami again for your sweet review...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. You are creative like most writers on this site.

[Loner]

Thanks to your eyes and intellect which finds me worthy of being called
a creative writer but in fact i do not consider myself a writer at all....

[Sami Khalil]

Your work and feelings speak for you. You are welcome

[Dark Tower]

A powerfully expressed piece of writing. It provokes a lot of thought thus making it a wonderfull read.

[africa]

God bless you. Hugs love

[Jibey]

A poem charged with passionate and intense feeling, menacing yet hopeful, threatening yet full of positives... a challenge that could make or break, an offer not to be refused for the wondrous pay-off..

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I agree with Poppy, This was powerfully written that touched my inter core!

[Ruth]

I think this is a wonderful idea! Unique and blistering, a lot of emotions within and a fantastic piece love! Loved the flow to it, amazing!
xoxo

[Dream Weaver]

A continuous flow of no punctuation like you were trying
to say it all in one breath..Putting that aside, your words
make up for this lack of punctuation. Beautiful, melancholic
terrifying and a heavyhearted truth that others I'm sure
can relate to. Nicely done... :)

[KAREN]

I thought it was a brilliant write! True feelings were expressed!