I crave for you!

I crave for you!

A Poem by Loner
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What a woman feels like for the man she loves deeply, madly and truly......

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                                                            I crave for you !











I feel alone while being with others,  feel depressed without you

want too hear from you day and night cannot sleep without you

i crave for you, what is this feeling ? its killing me from inside my

mind is numb, i am breathing but do not want to live without


you, i guess i crave for you, when the world is asleep i want too

crawl into your bed and  give you my endless love to you

Oh ! why cannot you see in my eyes, understand my body language

i have never felt like this before i crave for you"



feel useless without you i want to be touched by you again and yet

again under the sun , under the cool moonlight on the beach sand

just you and me hearing our heavy breathing and the waves there

too witness our love making when sparks are seen flying away



when our famished, fearful, naked bodies make a symphony of its

own yet craving for more and more  gasping for breaths yet need

more from each other,  you make love to me with your highs and

lows  i  still not feel satisfied when its my turn to come on top



i steal the show by making you ask for more and more

by touching you where you have never been touched before

i take you too your climax but stop only too look into your

eyes to let you know that " i crave for you".........






             

© 2011 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
Love is all about craving for your lover....
Its been a long time since i have written anything i hope i have not lost my touch
please review honestly.....

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Passionate with romance overflowing throughout....love it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loner

12 Years Ago

Soul Crusader U are way too kind to me thanks a million
for your review i am really honored.... read more
A fine celebration of a passionate heart... you combine the spiritual depth of the connection with the sensual pleasure of the craving... the 'coming on top' was frank and unrestrained... and the touching evoked such wonderful feelings... How well you capture those special longings

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not bad at all for not writing for sometime...
A nice romantic flow throughout...

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow that was beautiful i was touched :) nice job

Posted 13 Years Ago


No touch lost here! This was written in perfect taste. Passionate romantic and beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful! Romantice and full passionate

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 13, 2011
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Loner
Loner

Saudi Arabia



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Hi, iam a lawyer by proffession but dont practice now and a writer too iam an active writer on Helium, have won a National award on my book for kids. Have done 2 online courses on writing. Love to w.. more..

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