You turn me on - 2

This poem is a reply to my former poem " You turn me on" in this poem the man is confessing his love back to the love thirsty woman.

              

                   You turn me on - 2

Now that i have you in my arms and since you have

confessed that i turn you on, then let me tell you

"my precious ! you make my heart race, and my palms 

start to get wet just by seeing you , i never told 

 

you this before "you turn me on too". Your thoughts 

are enough to make my feelings stir, i have no desire 

to look at any other woman but you , God only knows

how much i crave for you, my eyes keep searching for you

i am brought to arousal just by thinking about you

 

Oh ! my darling, you turn me on too". I have never

felt like this before this feeling of love is driving 

me crazy too...... your unashamed desire of being 

loved by me is tantalizing me now i cannot hold on

 

any longer just like you, "Yes ! you are my woman 

and i am your man for life, let this wave of epic 

love engulf us so that our thirst for each other might

come to an end, feel my male hardness, feel my 

 

breath on your brow, feel what i want you too feel, my love!

drown in my touch, after this i will say no more

let me caress you, roam my hands all over your naked body

 hold you tight against my chest 

make captivating love too you.

 

Not for now my sweet heart ! its going to be 

forever, we will make endless love too each

other from now on,  tell me again how you want to

 be touched 

 

as i whisper to you  while making love too 

you like never before, we scream for more 

yet we seem to have our fill, our bodies entwined

hearts pulsating, sweat beads make our bodies shine

 

in this moonlight lying naked on this sea shore 

having your head on my chest , my fingers entangled

 in your hair, we get aroused again in a few minutes 

we start from scratch kissing each other passionately

 

i keep whispering too you " you turn me on too

my Dove !"

Author's Note

A reply from a man's point of view to this love thirsty woman.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

I think its great! Ignore the ones who say you're slipping, cause you're NOT! You're getting better, just on different style, because that's what every writer do, to try on different styles! And you do it right and great!
And i agree, thirsty IS the word to describe this woman, I love the reply though, so romantic!
Amazing!

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[Ruth]

Interesting perspective love! I enjoyed this a lot :) You have emotion over reeling here, brilliantly executed, not always easy to voice the emotions you know, you do it well! xx

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is a simple and sweet reply, with a loving and cute touch to it. I liked it. Good job.

[KAREN]

Sexy and passionate! Beautiful and full of that emotion called love! Excellent job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I loved it! Great flow and oh so sensuous! Beautiful!

[Madison A. Wright]

Very nice.. nice perspective to see what he is thinking. very passionate and pure emotion... nice write!

[Dream Weaver]

Both 1 and 2 from amn and woman perspectives
enrich this write almost turning it into a whirling
romance novel...nice job!