You turn me on

I hope i have done justice to this poem .

I wait to catch a glimpse of you, nothing on this earth

can satisfy me, the way you’ve awaken my senses 

Oh baby, you turn me on .

 

I fancy your touch so much that I weep for you on a cold 

lonely night. How can I put myself at ease when you’re

always in my dreams , Oh honey, you turn me on 

I have never said this before but I cannot control

my emotions any longer you drive me crazy....

 

Wanting you is all I ever wished for, I want to be

your woman for life, wanting your love in return 

is all I ask you for, possess me now as I am on the edge

of going insane , how do I explain it to you

Oh ! darling you turn me on!

 

Nothing matters too me I desire to be loved as well,

Do you have any idea what you are doing 

to me? I am all yours till the end of time Oh! Sweetie 

you turn me on

 

I will strive to be what you need me to be

just let me feel you profoundly within me " Please 

realize that I am burning with passion for you

I yearn to feel you deep within me.

 

I want too liberate my feelings towards you, for you’re

the one I have always loved." Do not think what is

right or what is wrong, make me feel alive for once

hold me caress me, make captivating love to me

Oh!  My love you turn me on!

Author's Note

Love is all about getting turned on !

Reviews

[Steve]

This is well done! I like this style......and it was fun to read.

[Dushyant Thadani]

This poem reminds me of many many paintings which depict love, and the way you've written this is good. Good work Guria

[Dream Weaver]

Well I believe it's all about what you feel inside,
and you described it perfectly...Nicely done...

[Jibey]

This poem is written in a prosy style, but it works as a series of intense statements about the longing of the poet and the desire for the fulfilment of her dreams... the chorus of 'you turn me on' is like a build-up... a real turn-on...*smiles8