You turn me on

I hope i have done justice to this poem .

I wait to catch a glimpse of you, nothing on this earth

can satisfy me, the way you’ve awaken my senses 

Oh baby, you turn me on .

 

I fancy your touch so much that I weep for you on a cold 

lonely night. How can I put myself at ease when you’re

always in my dreams , Oh honey, you turn me on 

I have never said this before but I cannot control

my emotions any longer you drive me crazy....

 

Wanting you is all I ever wished for, I want to be

your woman for life, wanting your love in return 

is all I ask you for, possess me now as I am on the edge

of going insane , how do I explain it to you

Oh ! darling you turn me on!

 

Nothing matters too me I desire to be loved as well,

Do you have any idea what you are doing 

to me? I am all yours till the end of time Oh! Sweetie 

you turn me on

 

I will strive to be what you need me to be

just let me feel you profoundly within me " Please 

realize that I am burning with passion for you

I yearn to feel you deep within me.

 

I want too liberate my feelings towards you, for you’re

the one I have always loved." Do not think what is

right or what is wrong, make me feel alive for once

hold me caress me, make captivating love to me

Oh!  My love you turn me on!

Author's Note

Love is all about getting turned on !

Reviews

[Dark Tower]

The passions in this poem are picked up in the first five lines, Its so erotic but without the gross perversion , very well written.

[Loner]

BC you are being way too kind to me now i bow my head in humbleness ......

[Dark Tower]

My kindness is well deserved. I would see you head not bowed, but raised in mutual respect.

[Loner]

who says writers cannot connect ? ... they connect with their invisible
thoughts which are painted with their pens dipped in heart felt emotions which has its highs and lows but leave an impact on the
reader which only a writer can understand...

[Dark Tower]

Could not have said it better myself.
To be a writer is to form relationships of the mind. Our hands caress body, but our words comfort the soul.

[Loner]

Wow !
that was beautiful definition of a writer i must say ....

[Dark Tower]

Thank you. I speak only what I feel.

[Loner]

Please do not thank me . That is the first step of being fearless Bc
when you are not afraid of expressing what you feel .

[Dark Tower]

That is true. I think it is a good way to be. Do not conceal what you keep in your heart, you never know when it may change someones day.

[Loner]

Either change or ruin his/her or your day .... * smiles *

[Dark Tower]

Haha, yes much better put. But personally, I believe we should strive to help each other.

[Loner]

Sure by all means .... how can i be of any help to u BC?
when i am lost myself .....

[Dark Tower]

Maybe I can provide you with map that sees you returned to yourself.

[Loner]

Are you a gin from the lamp of Alla din?
no offense intended it was an innocent cry of astonishment on my part
sorry to be rude ..... how can i get that map from u sitting miles apart
from u BC ????
i am really sorry for being so out spoken please do not be mad
at me?

[Dark Tower]

Do not apologise dear. Speak always what comes to your mind first. It is the most honest. The longest distance between you and me, is communication

[Loner]

Thanks for forgiving me BC. Speaking of communication we are
connecting well since 2hrs are we not???

[Dark Tower]

There is nothing to forgive. Indeed we are. You are a nice person to talk to.

[Loner]

* smiles * i thought i had lost all my charm .......

[Loner]

As my soul and body feels rusted and heavy with pain...

[Dark Tower]

Clearly some but still remains. A generous amount too

[Dark Tower]

Tell me about this rust?

[Loner]

* smiles * i am finding it strange to smile in front of my PC
when someone is peeping inside my soul and now wants to know
about this rust????

[Dark Tower]

If you find the reason to smile then it cant all be that bad.

[Loner]

U should never scratch on ones wounds or a hidden treasure
in both cases u end up getting disappointed/ amused or bored...

[Dark Tower]

Or perhaps you become overpowered by compassion.

[Loner]

At times yes, but the chances are slim ....

[Dark Tower]

Depends who you are.

[Loner]

I agree

[Marie Shine]

A very finely crafted sensual, passionate write, so romantically and tenderly inked. I love the excellent choice of graphics which is very complimentary to the poem. A very powerfully penned write which flows so effortlessly and smoothly from your pen. I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Blessings.....

[Madison A. Wright]

gotta love that burn, that burn that passion brings to us. its hot and undeniable.. just like this poem is. this poem deff turns one on!

[Matt Shriver]

Well done .So sensual and sexy. You can really feel the passion. So very vivid and descriptive. Full of raw emotion. Such a great write. Loved it.

[Ruth]

OK, I read these in reverse order LOL But you know what? This works just the same, what I love about this is the sheer vivdness to it, I can really imaginge the feelings too, excellent love! xx

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passionate! Love conquers all..wonderful

[An owl on the moon]

What a passionate fire that sweeps through the fields of love... all consuming and powerful. Your words confess the deepest riches one can find on earth.

[Cynthia]

A Very Romantic, Sweet Poem! I enjoy reading this kind of poem really much, especially the style! Especially the closing, it's really powerful and lovely, matching the poem really much!
Lovely, amazing!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is one excellent poem, love flowed from start to finish.

[KAREN]

Excellent write and read! The reader gets sucked in right from the beginning! It is full of desire and passion! Beautiful!!