My spine and soul

Lots of lovers have said quite a few things about love but this lover has something else in mind......

                                                  

          

 Remember when you asked me

how deep is my love for you,

I could not express it in appropriate

words how much I love you so. I was

contented in saying,

" You are my Spine and Soul"

 

You laughed and said " why is that

Why am I not your heart or breath?

I smiled held your hand and looked

deep in your eyes. And said in a 

soft voice  Hearts can be broken, breaths

can be stolen away in a swift motion, but

souls are deep inside ones body if not there

one one can die in the same way.

 

Spines are the foundations of a human

body if damaged one can be paralyzed

for life therefore I can only think

these two adages only too be worthy

of you my love ! “My Spine and Soul ".

                                

Author's Note

I am a bit unsure of this poem of mine i hope you all like this one too.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Hearts can be broken,
breathes can be stolen away
in a swift motion.
Love that . I also like the title.

[Loner]

Sami u are way too kind to me thanks for a lovely review....

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome.

[MOON]

This poem is absolutely beautiful . The soul is infinite and the spine carries you through life.
Salaams

[Loner]

I am so sorry for replying late i came on this site after ages
and found such a lovely review left by you thanks a lot for
your time and review i really appreciate it....

[Matt Shriver]

Amazing. I loved it.

[Madison A. Wright]

oh i love this!! spine and soul.. perfect way of describing your love for someone. i always say if you love someone put their name in a circle, bc a heart can be broken but a circle goes on forever!

[An owl on the moon]

You took us deep into the longing of one for another, and the imagery of that love set forth powerfully. It seems as if we've walked in on a moment so private... so beautifully sacred.

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well, this is simply a stunning piece..clever and concise..sentimental and tender..you explained with such aplomb the reasoning behind your answer and it was simply wonderful :)

[Steve]

This is nicely expressed! I like how your describe the permanence of this love using and illustration......very deep stuff!

[Dushyant Thadani]

This poem is lovely and the man you dedicate this work to must be a very lucky man. Beautifully written work on love. Good job.

[Cynthia]

I myself love it really much! I think the structure problem isn't really a problem since i think the shape or make out with a sentence is just a choice, and you choose your own, so, be sure about your poem, its great! I love the whole poem, the conversation, the most. The idea of love and what one mean to us is really lovely.
Also, the closing of this poem is wonderful as well!

It's a lovely write, full with love inside :)
Amazing!