Romancing With The Invisible !

Romancing With The Invisible !

A Poem by Loner
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Being a woman you will be able to relate better with this poem of mine when and what a teenager goes through until she reaches the womanhood, the urge for the opposite sex.

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                                      " Romancing With The Invisible"
 I smile as i see myself in the mirror a hair brush
in my hand, that strokes the 29th stroke in my
soft, silky hair the dim lights create a perfect 
atmosphere for a night to remember but
I turn around as i blush away thinking 
" I am only 16, right now." I apply a darker
shade of red lipstick on my inviting lips
a sensual perfume to arouse my victim
The background music brings chill down 
my spine " Am i doing anything wrong?
or its part of ones life?" I suddenly feel
nervous and turn around to find no one
But an empty room and of course my
satin sheet laid on my bed to welcome 
me, i take my dressing gown off as to 
prepare for the passionate ride waiting
For me, i lie my head on the soft satin 
pillow and immediately feel my body to
relax, i slide under my satin sheet and 
feel a man's touch on my naked body
I close my eyes, i gasp for breath , waiting
for the next move from the invisible i open
my arms to hold the other pillow tight between
my legs, i moan this time feeling the invisible 
Tastes  me with his tongue, i shiver with pleasure
i crave for more, but just then i open my eyes
to find myself alone on my bed, perspiring 
from my little secret. I ask myself "  is this 
how a girl climbs to the womanhood"?
Romancing with the invisible , imagining the 
impossible, yet forbidden, undiscussed
enticing , my private, hidden from the outside
world tempting , arousing sexual desires.

© 2011 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
A journey of a teenager from being an adolescent too a woman.

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gosh..Guria..that was salacious sensual and sexy...heat of a woman...perfect!

Posted 13 Years Ago


You described this in a very strong way, and I am not able to say much on this topic because I have no clue about it. But still its a very beautifully expressed work, and a job well done. Good flow of thoughts, and a good flow of emotions. It was sensual, deep and very profound.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's always a delicate topic to discuss from being a girl blossoming
into a woman. I think you've captured it quite well..Sensually soft
and profound....

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very daring piece of writing... an insight into the journey of an adolescent and the growing urgency of sexuality that in our society is somehow inadmissible... The writing is sensitive and intense, the fantasy and its effects real and highly erotic...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 21, 2010
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