Without  you !!!

Without you !!!

A Poem by Loner
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This poem is dedicated to my father who died 0ne month 4 days ago.

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                Without you

 

 

 

 

I never knew what my life would be like without you, I was so

Carefree when you were their Now I am a changed person

Without you, I took my first step by holding on too your

Finger now I walk alone ……… without you

 

 

The things you said and did are a matter of the past I

Never knew how I would feel without you, I have

Always been a part of you Papa but took this fact

For granted now that you are not there I realize

 

 

What it feels like loosing a parent, I sleep on your

Side of the bed, I hug your pillow at night

But it will never be the same again

As I am finding it hard too live without you

 

 

I never knew how much I loved you how much

You mattered too me Papa I never knew what

Death would be like until you left me

There was so much to be said

 

 

But life never gave me a chance I never knew

What it would be like not being able too see

Or hear you again, as I was so used to having

You around I never knew what it would

 

 

Be like without you!!!...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
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Excellent expression of love for someone who has passed on! Your words were sad and I could feel your emotion!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Written from the heart with that special feeling that only a daughter can have...

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's such a relateble, touching poem!
Losing a parent or anyone mean to you is horrible.
I feel very sorry for that, actually humans never know how poeple mean to us until they left. That's how every story of people says. We should love people we love more every moment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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oh I am so sorry for your lost...your poem though is touching and heart meltingly sad...

Posted 14 Years Ago


This a beautiful and touching peice my dear. My prayers be with you hon.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can relate to this love, my father dies six years ago this December and its still raw!
Take each day as it comes hon, I know thats cliche, but it truly does help! Seriously!
Beautiful poem hon, thoughts and love to you xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hello My Friend,

I hope you are holding up well. A loss of something so dear.....is a tragedy. I can only hope you come out of this stronger. My thoughts are with you still.

Your Friend,

Matthew

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww very cute

Posted 14 Years Ago


Losing a parent is orrible. They are your rock and your safety. When they go, so does your sense of safety and imortality. A bit if not all of childhood is lost. Very sad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautifully poetic..sadly inspirational and heartfelt...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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