"I am human too"

"I am human too"

A Poem by Loner
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This poem is my voice being disabled .

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    "Iam human too"

 

Don't look at me with such pity your look makes me
 Ask myself, “am I human too?

You maybe better in everything as compared to me
But I never asked God to make me disabled please
Remove your eyes from me I have feelings too

Don’t make fun of me nobody is perfect give me
Respect and love I have a heart too
I need a shoulder to cry on, don’t run away from
Me when I cannot even walk, I am human too

God never distinguishes among his fellow beings
Then who are you?
I am no plague, just disabled don’t push me away
Be my friend too

I crave for company I am tired of talking to myself
I am human too

Don’t judge me by my physical appearance I have
A heart full of love just like you
I am human too.

© 2010 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
My inner voice and a question to the world.

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Adore the touching statement of a talented person.
She is equal and comparable to anybody in all respect.
But,the envious ones often stare at her with disregard.
I denounce those creatures and appeal to them for being human.
Wonderful write,talented Loner.
Love the whole poem, but the following stanza appears special:

"Don’t judge me by my physical appearance I have
A heart full of love just like you
I am human too".


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Very nice of you
Loner

12 Years Ago

The pleasure is all mine kind Sir....
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
Enjoy it fully.



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a nice creation with feelings of despair, liked it. :)
best wishes

Posted 11 Years Ago


Prritiy

11 Years Ago

I could connect to it and could feel the feelings in it.
you wrote it nicely. :)
Loner

11 Years Ago

Thanks once again for reviewing my work..
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
I really love this. This has captured me. I've always wondered how those who are disable feel deep down inside amongst others who are not disable and you are absolutely right those who are disable are humans too. Beautiful. Piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


Loner

11 Years Ago

Hi Rotena ,
thanks a lot for appreciating and understanding my poem ....
Adore the touching statement of a talented person.
She is equal and comparable to anybody in all respect.
But,the envious ones often stare at her with disregard.
I denounce those creatures and appeal to them for being human.
Wonderful write,talented Loner.
Love the whole poem, but the following stanza appears special:

"Don’t judge me by my physical appearance I have
A heart full of love just like you
I am human too".


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Very nice of you
Loner

12 Years Ago

The pleasure is all mine kind Sir....
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
Enjoy it fully.
Totally beautiful and moving! Great write! Very relateble, very touching.
'Don’t make fun of me nobody is perfect give me
Respect and love I have a heart too'
Oh, how this made me remember the boys at my class keep making fun of me!
You every lines are great with deep feelings!
We are all human, yes, equal. Equal is what everyone look for, at least most of us, but someone will jst be too 'greedy' and can't let us be equal!
Nice Written, I truly love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beauty is in the eye of the beholder... and those who love truly love the person within... and for them the broken body or the helpless muscles are gifts of dependency that draw together. I recall a man I knew whose wife became severely disabled and he had to do everything for her in her final years - everything... He told me, 'We were never closer'. I have a friend in Macedonia whose teenage daughter has cerebral palsy and cannot walk unaided. She loves him dearly and he cares for her with all his heart. I have a daughter with a mental disability.. she is special in every way... Which of us is 'normal'? All of us have some kind of disability - emotional, intellectual, physical... We need each other... for when we hold hands, we can find our way...

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is excellent!
People mock what they do not understand, as humans, we are full of flaws! Its unsettling what extremity this can lead to!
Great poem love!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


HA THIS IS TO COOL! Sometimes you gotta let everyone know you are human as well and you do have feelings....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good

Posted 14 Years Ago


If you need someone to talk to or a shoulder to cry on so to speak my dear, I am here. I am a great listener and know the importance to confidentiality. Such a beautiful yet sad poem. Heartfelt, very heartfellt.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good flow. Sincere and heart felt. Good work with the words. A good but sad read. An interesting topic to write about, don't see many like these, atleast I have not. Good Work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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