Don't look at me with such pity your look makes me Ask myself, “am I human too?
You maybe better in everything as compared to me But I never asked God to make me disabled please Remove your eyes from me I have feelings too
Don’t make fun of me nobody is perfect give me Respect and love I have a heart too I need a shoulder to cry on, don’t run away from Me when I cannot even walk, I am human too
God never distinguishes among his fellow beings Then who are you? I am no plague, just disabled don’t push me away Be my friend too
I crave for company I am tired of talking to myself I am human too
Don’t judge me by my physical appearance I have A heart full of love just like you I am human too.
Adore the touching statement of a talented person.
She is equal and comparable to anybody in all respect.
But,the envious ones often stare at her with disregard.
I denounce those creatures and appeal to them for being human.
Wonderful write,talented Loner.
Love the whole poem, but the following stanza appears special:
"Don’t judge me by my physical appearance I have
A heart full of love just like you
I am human too".
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks for understanding my feelings and appreciating them .....
12 Years Ago
I am very pleased to have your compliments.
Thanks for your amazing gesture.
a nice creation with feelings of despair, liked it. :)
best wishes
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Hi Prritiy ,
really honored by your sweet review thank you for understanding
what i trie.. read moreHi Prritiy ,
really honored by your sweet review thank you for understanding
what i tried to say through this poem of mine...
I really love this. This has captured me. I've always wondered how those who are disable feel deep down inside amongst others who are not disable and you are absolutely right those who are disable are humans too. Beautiful. Piece
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Hi Rotena ,
thanks a lot for appreciating and understanding my poem ....
Adore the touching statement of a talented person.
She is equal and comparable to anybody in all respect.
But,the envious ones often stare at her with disregard.
I denounce those creatures and appeal to them for being human.
Wonderful write,talented Loner.
Love the whole poem, but the following stanza appears special:
"Don’t judge me by my physical appearance I have
A heart full of love just like you
I am human too".
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks for understanding my feelings and appreciating them .....
12 Years Ago
I am very pleased to have your compliments.
Thanks for your amazing gesture.
Totally beautiful and moving! Great write! Very relateble, very touching.
'Don’t make fun of me nobody is perfect give me
Respect and love I have a heart too'
Oh, how this made me remember the boys at my class keep making fun of me!
You every lines are great with deep feelings!
We are all human, yes, equal. Equal is what everyone look for, at least most of us, but someone will jst be too 'greedy' and can't let us be equal!
Nice Written, I truly love it!
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder... and those who love truly love the person within... and for them the broken body or the helpless muscles are gifts of dependency that draw together. I recall a man I knew whose wife became severely disabled and he had to do everything for her in her final years - everything... He told me, 'We were never closer'. I have a friend in Macedonia whose teenage daughter has cerebral palsy and cannot walk unaided. She loves him dearly and he cares for her with all his heart. I have a daughter with a mental disability.. she is special in every way... Which of us is 'normal'? All of us have some kind of disability - emotional, intellectual, physical... We need each other... for when we hold hands, we can find our way...
This is excellent!
People mock what they do not understand, as humans, we are full of flaws! Its unsettling what extremity this can lead to!
Great poem love!
xx
If you need someone to talk to or a shoulder to cry on so to speak my dear, I am here. I am a great listener and know the importance to confidentiality. Such a beautiful yet sad poem. Heartfelt, very heartfellt.
Good flow. Sincere and heart felt. Good work with the words. A good but sad read. An interesting topic to write about, don't see many like these, atleast I have not. Good Work.
Hi, iam a lawyer by proffession but dont practice now and a writer too iam an active writer on Helium, have won a National award on my book for kids. Have done 2 online courses on writing.
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