Loneliness

This poem is the expression of a lonely person missing his/her loved one.

“When the nights get cold and the stars shine

 

 high in the sky I miss you,  it would have different if

 

was born a loner, but how can

 

I erase the memory of you holding my hand

 

and saying “ I love you so.” 

 

Now that you are not with me, I feel

 

incomplete just like a word half written, just like a

 

chore left undone , just like ones fate half written

 

and its paper crumpled  and thrown on the floor.

 

From where should I start my life now ?

 

when my pillow gets wet with  tears you are

 

 not there too dry them  and whisper back  to me

 

 as you always did   saying “ I love you so”. 

 

My days are aimless ,

 

my life is useless now, that you are not

 

 with me I take your name and say

 

“ I am so lonely without you.”

Author's Note

This is for all the lonely people out there.

Reviews

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
well written..
I like this part:

"Now that you are not with me,
I feel incomplete
just like a word half written,
just like a chore left undone"

good work..

[HorrorMaster]

Aww i'm always lonely so thank you so much for this lovely poem.

[SJ]

This is very hard hitting, and reading this you can deffinately feel the emotions within the poem.

This poem can mean several different things, a broken heart, missing a loved one.

Your writing deffinately lets the reader connect with it.

Keep writing!

[Dream Weaver]

A heart ache still dependent for what you have
lost and so dreadfully need in your life. Tis all
to saddening. A very emotional write. Well done.