Your untamed  love

Your untamed love

A Poem by Loner
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This is abt the love of a jungle woman who falls in love with a man living in a city.

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      Your un-tamed love


Lick my tears away hide me in your arms, teach me how to live my life as I am your un-tamed love.

 

People take me for granted and break my heart into pieces, I don’t know how to mend

 

my ways as I am your un-tamed love.

 

 I may not be civilized as you are because I live in the jungle, but I have a heart like

 

yours and the endless need to be loved like you do

 

 So vow to me that you will never leave me just because I am your untamed love.

 

My body craves for you now, I want to lie beside you,

 

although we don’t speak the same language but we love each other,

 

 so try to understand my actions and calm your untamed love. 

 

I will understand your love for sure as this emotion has no language then

 

what are you waiting for?

 

Show me how deep is your love for me?

 

 And I will learn the notes by heart as I am your untamed love.

 

© 2010 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
Please ignore the puntuation mistakes and grammar .

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Love does not discriminate...love your take on it here...jungle woman and city guy....
great poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loner

12 Years Ago

Thanks for your sweet review.....
I like the idea of the wild woman who desires the sophisticated love of the city man... but maybe he likes the thought of lying with the wild woman... of how she would possess his body, with animal eagerness, intensity of need

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sincerly from the heart. punctuation and grammer aside,
this is a beautiful write....

Posted 14 Years Ago



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