Incomplete

This poem is about a woman who feels incomplete without her lover.

               Incomplete

 

I walk alone on this dark starry night, thinking of how much I am left incomplete without you. So many questions un-answered so many gaps to be filled,

 

How can I do this all alone? As I am incomplete without you, this constant ache in my heart keeps reminding me how unhappy I am, come into my life and give me a reason to

 

Live for as I am incomplete without you, not a day goes by when I do not think of you,

Come and make the circle of my life complete as my dearest,

 I am incomplete without you.

 

How far can I go now as I am alone, make me live my life to the fullest as I am incomplete without you?

 

I am slowly and gradually loosing the grip on my life, come and soothe me as I am incomplete without you. I need you to walk beside me through all the paths to come in

 

My life I am tired of being alone as I am incomplete without you,

 I cannot wait much longer as my hope is fading away and my strength is at its end

 

Oh ! why cannot I see you running towards me and holding me in your arms saying

 

“never say again that I am incomplete without you”.

 

Author's Note

A woman who is waiting for the love of her life.

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

There is that person who is waiting for you also...The power of prayer and patience is the key...Then we the one that is sent we have to accept...Happy waiting...Sunflower

[Faceless Love]

I feel the emotions of waiting, sadness, and being a lone. Great write.

[Alicante lullaby]

i think you need to work a bit more on your punctuation...though,i'm also suck at punctuation...other than that passionate...

[HorrorMaster]

Awesome work and it makes me want to hug you.

[Dream Weaver]

A very compelling write, sadness lonliness and the
quest to find another. All are recipes for heartache.
nicely done.