Love me like never before

This poem portrays a scared woman running away from her people and meets her lover.

         Love me like never before

I have come to you all tired and drained I am trembling with fear and perspiring from head to toe take me in your arms and love me like never before whisper in my ear those three words I crave for calm my nerves by running your fingers in my hair, lie beside me and kiss my parched lips please oh! Please, love me like never before.

I might not be ready for this so be patient with me say all the sweetest things you can think of, you also know I will give in because I told you once I want to feel you like a drop of water sliding down my body so don’t stop love me like never before.

A lot has been said between us now is the time to prove it,  lets not think for once

just love me like never before I want to drown in you, do you feel the same as I do?
If yes, then my darling! Love me like never before.

Author's Note

Hope you all like this one too.

Reviews

[Jibey]

The sense of a desperate woman wanting consolation and comfort comes through powerfully... When we feel we have been beaten and are weak and pained, there is a special kind of sweetness, when we sink into the arms of a loved one, when the torn garments wet with sweat and tears give way to the soft fleshly warmth... when words of anger and hurt turn to words of intense need, reaching out and touching and feeling those tender places, like the drop of water sliding down the body, like the fingers that find the place and gently caress, feeling the sweet wetness, the soft yielding, the arousal that finds its home, melding two beating hearts into an intensity of union where words are no more, only the panting of breath and the soft moans of two holding tight to each other, emptying their deepest feelings into the place of joining, spilling within the seeds of new life...new joy

[J.S. Pua]

yeah..
this is beautiful..
and would have been better..
if written in stanzas..
good work..

[Dream Weaver]

This is beautiful and heartfelt. I would break it down
into stanzas to savor every line..well done....

[HorrorMaster]

I thought it was pretty good. I like it.