If you are beside me

If you are beside me

A Poem by Loner
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This poem is about a woamn who is a victim of mistrust and regrets meeting the man of her dreams so late in her life.

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                                        If you are beside me


Do not search for answers in my eyes I know a lot needs to be explained but for now take me in your arms and make me feel safe again and take away all the pain that is in stored in me, which is trying its best to put an end to me but I am a fighter, I know I will win the fight only if you are beside me. It seems I have not lived my life at all, now that I have you I don’t want anything from life if you are beside me, make me feel like a queen by saying “ “ you are mine only and I love you my sweetest.” 

I will live again as if nothing happened to me although I am a victim of mistrust now that I have you I can over come any hurdle in my life if you are beside me I want to live my life  again lets start afresh because you are all I want I might not be the perfect choice for you as I have flaws in me a lot more then you have but I will try my best to keep you happy because all I want is you.

You are the one who has made me feel complete and I love to dance to your tune let me show you how much I love you my dearest!  By becoming an answer to your prayer but only if you are beside me.
 

© 2010 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
I have tried to protray an image in a persons mind when a woman/man meets the person of his/her dreams this is how he/she must be feeling at that time, while before she/he met the person of his/her dreams how difficult life was and now after meeting the PERSON, what emotions are of the individual who is in love with this PERSON.

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Very true words :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loner

12 Years Ago

* smiles * thanks a lot for your encouraging review i am honored ....
There is a sense of relief to have found someone to trust, someone who offers warmth and comfort, someone who will protect and cherish.... It is a lovely stream of thought... a lovely longing and hoping for the dance of true love

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw! This is good too! But the thing that diferentiates a poem from a story or prose is at first its structure. And then the words u select. Your choice of words is great but a good structure and may be a little rhyme can make u'r poems great. That is all :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


avery passionate write gurriah...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Loner
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