Life in a box

Just a prospective what life is all about , and why we should live it ...........

         Life in a box

Enough of the bragging about love
and the dam romance let me not
fool myself further, and talk about
life which is invisible but vital

Harsh, but for some nothing but
a piece of trash, everyone has
something or another to say about
their life in a box which is over

Before you know it, " Hey ! ... i was
too young to die, let me die i have
nothing to live for, i am breathing
just for you baby".... are just excuses

Too either die or live for someone
or another, at times maybe nothing
to live for, are the different shades of
what you , me and everyone is living

This thing inflicted upon us  is either
a blessing or a punishment
to deal with are different point of views heard now and then about this life ......

In a box, i am not a preacher neither
am i fond of living, but then why be a
coward/cowardice and run away from
something which is giving me and you

A tough time why not stare in its eyes
and face the game fight, dam it fight
till you have no strength anymore that
is what i call a brave heart , until then its an

Escapist attitude loosing without even
attempting at it, before you know it
this life grins at you saying " i win you
loose , you are such a looser " by then

Its too late to get up and charge at the
dam life because either you are dead
by then or have lost all what you owned
"life is a teacher learn from it, try not to

Trip over the same stone twice"  is  what
is said by the Messenger of God so why
not keep this in our minds and deal with
the good or bad we have on our hands

And learn from our mistakes by not
repeating them again rather then cursing
our life why not turn over a new leaf
before its too late .... after all its just

A life in a box .......    
                        

Author's Note

A different poem from all the love and romantic ones ....
Hope i have succeeded in being serious once in my life.....

Reviews

[Tree]

You have inspired a few things to think about...

Diego

[Loner]

So very thankful to u for taking the time out and giving me
such a precious review i am really honored

[KAREN]

Lessons to learn and live by!

[Loner]

I really appreciate your review thanks a lot.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great message in this well written piece!

[Loner]

Thanks a lot for your time and review.

[Jibey]

I like the gutsy strength of this, the determination and affirmation of facing life's challenges and not running away from them... The writing shows the strength of your mind and provides a nicely gift-wrapped box of wisdom

[Loner]

I bow to u in humbleness Jibey ........ thanks a lot

[Owlgirl]

Wow, with the emotion and power in this, just . . . wow. Awesome writing. The message you send is a unique and powerful one, great job. I am entranced within the lines, well written, amazing. . .

[Loner]

I will always treasure your reviews which are so
encouraging for me ....... thanks a million once again.

[Dark Tower]

A beautiful piece my dear. Rich with genuine emotion and each line inspires more than the last.

[Loner]

Thank you so much BC for your review and appreciation
it means a lot too me....

[White Ink]

Very wise and well said! i couldn't agree more.. much respect.
*two thumbs up* :)

[Loner]

So very sweet of you too take out time
and give me such an encouraging review thanks a lot......

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow!!! This sure is serious, deep and philsophical....
has wisdom that rings true and inspires the reader when read.....
at least it did me.

And you're an inspiration too :)

[Loner]

Yas u are a true gentleman and shower kindness upon me
as rain pours on a dead sun flower ...... Thank you so
much for your encouraging reviews ...... i will always treasure
them ...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

you're most welcome :D