My wet dreams instead of you

This poem is about a lover who craves for her lover at night when she is away from him..

             My wet dream instead of you


I toss and turn every night thinking of you, hot and restless
in my bed with just a limp pillow to hug instead of you
with my eyes shut and not fully asleep i reach out for you
but its just myself in the room  to cradle with moans of

despair in the pitch darkness when it should be you
instead to hold me in your arms, close to your bare
chest, running your fingers in my tangled loose hair
our faces just an inch apart and are lips thirsty

 caress as they find each other with our naked bodies
under the sheet and the wind blowing from the bedroom
window, a moon shines on our entwined hot, exasperated
bodies craving for more and more not know how to stop

our love making passes through the phase of its high's and
low's when we reach down to feel each others heat
that turns us on even more we refrain from putting
an end to this playful act of ours and reach for kisses

in order to turn the fire back on, we kiss till our lips
our swollen we fondle each other till we are wet as a
blanket but we do not give up this feeling of desire
within our selves , then the time comes when i scream

for you to burst into me like  gushing water out of a
dam which needs just a signal or a nod to let go of
its fullness, i guide your hardness in this pitch darkness
to my alley and you just push yourself in me in one

swift swing while i tighten my grip on you with
my legs around your hips i pull you towards me
not letting go of you this time, i feel you fill me
through and through that is when you come on

top of me and kiss my half open lips, sucking at them
licking and biting at times i welcome this intimacy between us
because this is what i also want , the more you push in me
the harder we kiss, while this is going on you grab my

wet sweaty breasts to hold on to and you kneed them away
sometimes hard sometimes slow , this makes me even more
wet and i get hold of your balls and squeeze them which makes
you moan and push harder in me we abuse each other , we bite

now and then but still are not over with each other finally
when i reach my orgasm as it takes me a while to do so
which is why i never let you enter me so soon , i hug you
tighter then before and we reach our limits together

when i open my eyes finally its just me in my bed with
yet another wet dream of mine to accompany me
instead of you , i get up wash and bathe with a long sigh
hoping this will be the last wet dream of mine instead of you....
 

Author's Note

Hope its liked by all again .... honest reviews and ratings please

Reviews

[africa]

I didn't like the font colour.

[Matt Shriver]

Awesome work.

[Loner]

Thanks a lot for your review Matt

[KAREN]

Romantic and hot! Dreams like that are worth remembering!

[Loner]

Thanks a million for your review

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Whew! this was hot, sensous, very sexy indeed! love the opening stanza and the ending just intwined it all together perfectly!

[Loner]

Thanks a lot for your time and your sweet review .....
i am honored ....

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Welcome! Thanks for all my reviews as well! I'm a little behind on my reading"LOL"

[Loner]

U are always welcome ....

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very hot piece of poetry, yet the last paragraph adds that emotional human side to the contrasting animalistic raw side....great writing :D

[Loner]

Thanks a million Yas for your kind and lovely review although this
poem of mine is a nude piece of after midnight talkies but i could
not refrain from penning it down ..... how shameful of me i accept ....

[Jibey]

I liked that you gave vent to your aroused desires

[Loner]

* smiles *

[Teri B]

Lots of passion and emotion here!

[Loner]

Thanks a lot Teri B for your time and nice review i really
appreciate it from the bottom of my heart....

[Jibey]

This was sensational! It flowed out of you, like love juices... You imagined the scene with such intense feelings, as though it was real... You described in graohic and explicit terms the foreplay with is caresses and fondlings.. and then the plunging of his member into your dark depths and your urgent response.. love the kneeding of sweaty breasts and the squeezing of balls... I woke up to the fact that it was a dream in the last verse... but it had seemed so real up to then...

Lovely, wild writing

[Loner]

Thanks for your review Jibey...

[Jibey]

So formal :-)

[Dream Weaver]

Vey hot, with a melancholy ending..well done!

[Loner]

Thanks Dream weaver it means a lot to me your review.

[Dream Weaver]

You're quite welcome Loner...