The Chess Match.

The Chess Match.

A Poem by Kyle

All the pieces on the board are half gone.

You are the king and the last to stand.

The last to stand on the bloodshed...

The bloodshed of all your protectors,

all of your people,

all of your kingdom,

all of your life.

It's all drenched in red.

 

A sickening red.

 

A fowl red.

 

As you move your black knight into play, 

he makes his way across the board,

protecting you,

making sure you are safe.

He's your last chance to victory.

So, you let him accomplish the goal.

 

Defeating the pure white king.

 

You stand there
At his side,

As he bows to you.

You look down, 

standing in the blood of the other king.

 

You notice that what you asked has now been completed.

The goal you wanted was for him to be at defeat.

Your knight knows you wouldn't admit it.

But even you too, saw the end of your life.

You stand high on the other side of the board.

On the other side of the courtyard.

On the other side of another kingdom.

 

You sit down, on the bloody throne.

And you watch this blankness fill inside you.

A darkness lifts your soul, and you fall apart.

 

And disappear,

 

in the dark.

© 2015 Kyle


Author's Note

Kyle
Eh, ignore my grammar problems.
And yeah, reviewss.
That would be nice.
Let the chess match begin!~

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This reminded me of a series Hikaru no Go.. mmm fun :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


You must be playing this game to know the strategies that well and penned it with words

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reminds me of Black Butler... very nice. I liked the poem. Can't wait to read more!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem shows most of the chess strategies ..
i just loved reading it..
want to see more of this type..can't help..lol
going to my favorites ..all the best:)

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Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Checkmate... but then again, what king could say that his hands are clean of any kind of blood whatsoever. Loved the imagery, loved the description, loved the ending. At the cost of all else people will fight for power and for their supposed honor.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it. How it was discribed and how you used the visual words. This poem just like other of your poems was spectacular. I loved it!!!!!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A real cool concept! Nice imagery. What a great idea to use the chess board..kudos.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Loved it. (:
Yes, there were grammar problems and spelling problems lol
but amazing (:

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Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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