Reaons

Reaons

A Poem by Kandii
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Reasoning

"

There is no reason why my soul is bleeding,

but you left me here to die

There is no reason why my soul is bleeding,

your killing me from the inside.

There is no reason why my heart is bleeding,

yet you stabbing me my whole life.

There is no reason for what I do.

But there will always be a reason for you.

 

© 2008 Kandii


Author's Note

Kandii
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Kandii,

I like the repetition here: "There is a reason why my...". I especially like the change from "soul" to "heart." I am reminded of Alanis Morissette through that change in words. Alanis, like you, is very subtle with that sort of thing, and I think that it is wonderful everytime.

FRANK

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Kandii

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