Can you see...

Pain

Can you see the real me,

behind my concealed eyes,

behind all my lies,

behind all my tears

Do you see my security

or only my fears.

Can you see my past

my scars of hate

My suicide fate

the times of betrayal

and everything that i failed

can you see what changes i made

and all the scars that fade

Do you beleive in me

Look into my eyes

and tell me what you see.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Advise sorry about grammer and stuff

Reviews

[Wildecat]

A very nice write, a pleasure to read your poem.