Hiding in silence

Close your eyes,

Silence the sound,

slowly breath,

listen to the words,

that are coming from me.

A gentle breeze,

grazes the skin,

now take a deep breath.

Relax your muscles,

open you eyes,

listen to the noise.

A flash of light,

a darkness surounds you.

No noise to be heard,

death has found you.

Author's Note

Adivce please...

Reviews

[Jules]

This is a very serene and peaceful poem! However it incoporates so effectively a darkness and solemnity to it that is quite amazing! the transmission of death that is in this poem is superb! well written!

[Elzereth]

Very interesting and beautiful poem. You seem to have a way with words. Keep up the good work!