What you say

You say you can show me the world

All the places I never knew

And I don't hesitate to fall

I fall hard

Because of the romantic part of me

Nobody said I would eventually hit the floor

Better yet liquid

Drowning in a pool of love

A deep crimson color

I think I fell to hard

Reviews

[Meredith Leigh]

'And I don't hesitate to fall

I fall hard

Because of the romantic part of me

Nobody said I would eventually hit the floor'

- I think that as really creative, and I liked the emotion in this. I could feel what this poem was trying to convey quite easily. Awesome work!!

- Kriss