Heartbeat

Heartbeat

A Poem by Onyx Sky
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Mini Write

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It is said you heart beats 103, 680 times a day

But I'm certain

Without a doubt

My heart has beat 153, 680 times

On days that I'm with you

© 2008 Onyx Sky


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There you go again!
Using your descriptive talent to do and take your reader just where you want them to go!
6 lines spoke a thousand words!
Another EXCELLENT piece!
Your Bio speaks to your work perfectly... you can't be put into a box because it would "Explode"!!! :)

I love a good descriptive writer...
Your stlye has a smooth yet charming apeal!

Your fan,
The Duchess...

Posted 16 Years Ago
bluessadmood u make me laugh. :) :) :)

Posted 16 Years Ago
Mini write was a wonderful thoughtful write ..but at that rate ..people in love will never live long a fast beating heart surely will fail soon it can not bear such a fast beat all the time ha ha

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Onyx Sky
Onyx Sky

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