Cycle of Truth

Broken hearts/ broken life

I've suffered

2 broken hearts

1 lost soul

10 thousand lies

An eternity cried

 

1 falled angel

2 engagement rings

Too many broken promises

Living in a dream

 

1 Beautiful woman

Too many fishes in the sea

1 to many bad ones

Clung theirselves to me

 

Evil Creeps in

Various forms and sizes

The more hurt you cause

Wins you all the prizes

 

Guilt never kicks in

Callous hearts weave a story

You lie dorment

In your state of purgatory

 

Vengeance just causes more pain

Hatred is condoned

Cycle of the truth

Treads on hearts of stone

 

THey don't give a damn about the truth

Wishing all people can be good

Dumbest wish to make

Reflections are fake, lies not understood

 

Cycles of the truth

Weave through lives like magic

Waitin to be known

Repeating all things tragic

 

They say time heals

But it only moves on

I got left in the darkness 

I got left alone 

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

I hear you Gorgeous, Love is a lie sometimes, I just thank God ,that his love is forever. And just remember those people were removed so God can bring the real man to you. Great write, I felt this I trully did. Orlando Murcia

[Succubi]

i love the flow and the tone of this poem
it is really passionate and bitter at the same time
but its gentle and meek also
the context was great...
especially the lines "I've suffered

2 broken hearts

1 lost soul

10 thousand lies

An eternity cried"

[darkgurl]

"I've suffered 2 broken hearts 1 lost soul 10 thousand lies An eternity cried" Love these lines here, loved this write, very well expressed, this is a wonderful piece here, like this alot.

[Onyx Sky]

hey thnx and thnx for the correction

[Deleted]

Flows really well! I love it!

The line "1 beautiful women" should be woman

Keep up the good work!