If only you knew...

If only you knew...

A Poem by Onyx Sky
"

To all those hurt by others

"

If words could express all the pain I have felt in the past year

The words would bleed through pages and pages of stories

That went left unsaid

 

The words would leap off buildings

Drown in ocean waters

Then resurrect thmselves

Only to die 100,000 times the same way again

 

The words would pour salt into wounds beyond healing

Prey on the mourning

And cut deep into the backs

Of those not expecting

 

If only you knew the words I cannot express

If only you felt all my pain and my stress.

© 2008 Onyx Sky


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Oh dear I know how words can be so bitter ,and cut through skin
through heart,pain even more than being stabbed with a sharp object
it hurts a lot ..i have been hurt a lot so i understand perfect what you mean
yes i wonder how some could be so cruel ,i guess it needs real talent
to hurt..sometimes i would like to hurt back,but i swear i always fail
its like i do want it badly ..to hurt but i just can not
that was a wonderful writing ..i could feel your pain so well
wonderful write...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow ! This poem is heavy , heavy. I love it. going through major life changes.This really draws me in , i wish you would keep it the same and dont change a thing! Great write

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh dear I know how words can be so bitter ,and cut through skin
through heart,pain even more than being stabbed with a sharp object
it hurts a lot ..i have been hurt a lot so i understand perfect what you mean
yes i wonder how some could be so cruel ,i guess it needs real talent
to hurt..sometimes i would like to hurt back,but i swear i always fail
its like i do want it badly ..to hurt but i just can not
that was a wonderful writing ..i could feel your pain so well
wonderful write...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a well written poem that I believe truly describes the pain one feels. I really enjoyed reading it, and knew exactly what you were talking about.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Onyx Sky
Onyx Sky

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