The Hustle Bustle of The Town !!

And in the hustle bustle of the town;

people came rushing

went rushing too

rushed the air

rushed the beings

rushing was the form

waitings rushed

unwaitings rushed

rushed the thoughts

rushed the whole crowd.

And in the hustle bustle of the town;

calmness was a nightmare

uncalm thoughts

uncalm were the beings

even loving was uncalm

hates were uncalmful enough

uncalmness bereaved

uncalmness brooded

uncalm happiness

uncalm were the sadness.

And in the hustle bustle of the town;

there was light at some end

though dim

it showed hope

hopeful were the vibes

hopeful dreams

hopes belied

hopes bestowed

hopes smiled

hopes prevailed.

:-)!

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the punchy lines and the repetition.
It gave me a frantic feeling.
Your idea was expressed brilliantly.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

the artwork is great..the poem is equally beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and good description. I like the thoughts and places described in the poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote