Love Upreared

Love said

love more

for the love

just love

I agreed

loved love

just love

loved the more

Love said

love's done

don't love

love anymore

I agreed

unloved love

no love

for the love

Love said

love again

not me

the other love

I was stoned

eyes dried

pain upheaval

but love not loved

Love inspects

love summons

love threatens

to unlove love

I said,

when all the love

ended with love

how do I love love?

Author's Note

Sudden splash of love thoughts

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem made me a bit dizzy, but I enjoyed it.
It made me think of how sometimes after we've done
enough laps, we lose our memory of where things end
and where they begin. Nice work! Its quite brilliant how
the things can seemingly spawn from nothing.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:-)
Yeah. You put it wonderfully :-)

[Terrence Chang]

This is a good tongue twister if you try to read it fast. Well written though

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Hehe....Thanks ya Terence. I tried :-)

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem dear Poet. I liked the way you twist the words and the thoughts.
"I said,
when all the love
ended with love
how do I love love?"
The questions of love. Hard to answers and some questions may take a lifetime to understand. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thank you much for your words Coyote.
It's always encouraging to get your reviews :-) Gratitude

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.