The waitings!

As the waits are on

I waited
all those moments
just to see that smile
and the smile
just vanished
in a fraction of while

The waits I made
were worth of it
though it last not long
those were my feels
in the momentarily bliss
had it been no wrong

Some more thoughts
just flung along
as flipped the time hereby
I waited again
to feel those moments
and just bid a goodbye!

Metta!

Author's Note

As the feels flows by ~~!!

Reviews

[Chris]

memories viewed over the distance of a thousand yard stare...

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Ahh! you say it so well

[Mayank]

Time flies, we wait for the right moment to see the person, to feel them. Sometimes, we say good-bye.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

True words Mayank :-)!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This piece tugs at the heart strings. It overflows with emotion.
It is a very intimate portrait done in the most artistic way.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thanks ya...These words boost up my spirits :-)!

[Dallan]

That's beautiful. Really strikes what I'm feeling myself.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Ahh! that makes me feel good :-)
Hi-five