Peril of thoughts

Thoughts move on

I,

speak

and then

quietened

I,

smiled

and then

cried

Smiles,

amidst the sorrows

cries

in the pain

Grief,

in the perils

thoughts

with perks

I,

jot words

thrash them

on the wall

I,

the prescient

me

the narrator

Metta !!

Image courtesy: Deviant Art

Author's Note

:-)

Reviews

[Mayank]

This is like turbulent of thoughts, they all mix very well. I like the way you have used the flow. It make readers pause and make them develop that imagery. Excellent work.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thank you so much for your words Mayank :-)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You made bold and powerful imagery.
This is a work of art.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Gracias :-)
Your words mean a lot :-))!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description of emotion in the poem. Emotion do mean we are alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

I am always boosted up with your reviews :-)
Much thanks :-))!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoy my journey into your words.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:-)
Awesome I feel

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad. Your poetry is very good.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Words bound #Gratitude