Silverbird

I was carried by a thought and result was this write

I was happy,

You were there

I smiled,

You smiled with me

I cried,

You wiped my tears

I played,

You were the best at games

I talked,

You were garrulous

I quietened,

You replied the silence

I questioned,

You were always my answer

I was furious,

You were the soother

I dared,

You held me strong

You gave me the wings,

I fled as "Silverbird"

Reviews

[Brenden Taylor]

Nice use of brevitas in this piece: straight to the point. However, its conciseness may cripple its power in some moments (ex. in the third and fourth lines of the second stanza). And I wish I was as enthusiastic about the term "Silverbird" as you were.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thank you so much Brenden, your words mean a lot :)
Much inspired :))

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

And yes Brenden I tried to changed those verses
(PS: I was feeling the same earlier and your say made me turn down the tables ) :)