write, written

write, written

A Poem by KalliRose
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This poem doesn't make much sense i suppose, what's your interpretation?

"
Love lovely
Fully full
truly true
young and old 

Risky risks
are dangerous dangers
love me, lovely
let's not be strange strangers

found or finding
bind or bounded 
all around me
i am surrounded 

with loving lovers
i am only confounded
by the honest honesty
that keeps them grounded

© 2016 KalliRose


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'To' the honest honesty.. Could be 'by'
It's a healthy positive poem, a bit like song lyrics

Posted 11 Years Ago


KalliRose

11 Years Ago

Oh! it actually is supposed to be 'by'. thanks:)
Thank you! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is actually really nice!
i personlly love the "Risky risks, are dangerous dangers love me, lovely, let's not be strange strangers" it reminds me of two people falling in love but they know somethings not right with thier love, but they get passing it and LOVE each other anyways. nicely done, my friend :))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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