A Farewell to a Child Unloved

Part one of The Aldeara Trilogy , Please enjoy ,

My mother was never Kind

Her teeth once she was mad would grind

My tears would fall once  she raised her arm

No one heard me scream on the farm

I tore my head off begging her to stop

But she would still hit me from bottom to top

I cried my eyes dry 

Yet on the floor i lie

I stormed out

The tempest Roared as I stood

Might this stop the pain, 

I hope it could

The wind spun around the Farm

My mother's face filled with alarm

I flicked my fingers and she's Dead

I flick again and I have her head

The Darkness over me Loomed

Yet my Taste for it Bloomed

As i look into her lifeless eyes it Boomed

I am so happy that my mother is Doomed

I spin her head around and around

Laughter is my only sound

I dance with her without a care

For i found my master..........Despair

Author's Note

Please keep an open mind about this

Reviews

[Niall Madden]

A nice take on the idea that abuse leads to abuse it holds this cycle of violence idea and I like it, the fact that it holds a rhyming structure makes it seem like a structured cycle. I do think proper punctuation could help the poem greatly. but I enjoyed it

[Kalistophage]

Thank you so much for the Review , I guess i do need to work on my punctuation, thank you so much ,